Friday, July 17, 2009

Rose


July, summer rain came
with unintentional harshness ---

Thoughts evaporated
into humidity, which
permeated through my garden
where I saw a rose,
blooming herself,
under the gaze of daylight---

She is naked
She is white
She is whiter than the winter Moon...
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14 comments:

  1. Tami AbiusoMarch 7, 2010 at 8:57 PM

    You are a lovely writer. I enjoyed reading your poems very much. They are well written and thought provoking. Bravo!

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  2. Yun YiMarch 7, 2010 at 10:49 PM

    thanks The Holistic Diva!

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  3. Fatuous AnilityMarch 22, 2010 at 10:02 PM

    Very nice poem with beautiful imagery.

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 23, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    smiles.

    stunning words,

    she is naked, she is white..
    these lines are brilliant.
    :)

    Happy Rally.

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  5. Yun YiMay 23, 2011 at 2:44 PM

    thanks Jingle! :-)

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  6. Vinod NarayanMay 23, 2011 at 11:09 PM

    Thoughts evaporated! loved it

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  7. Yun YiMay 23, 2011 at 11:21 PM

    thanks Vinod Narayan.

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  8. AnonymousMay 24, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    Enchanting! Great choice of words...
    Thanks for stopping by too ;)

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  9. Yun YiMay 24, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    thanks! magdalenahermanstories

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  10. StephanieMay 26, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    I love that this describes a moment with such vivid clarity...like I am there with you. This is a good poem.

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  11. MeiroMay 27, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    Thought provoking< I enjoy reading your work Yun Yi.
    Hugs

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  12. Yun YiMay 27, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    thank Stephanie&Meiro

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  13. AnonymousMay 28, 2011 at 2:14 AM

    Graceful and beautiful. I love the last part!

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  14. Yun YiMay 28, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    thanks mindlovemisery!

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