Thursday, March 5, 2015

Life

life, by design
is confined within limited
dimensions, yet
imagination strives 
to go beyond
disregards the eternal torment of
irresolution
between the comfort of
confinement and
freedom of
uncertainty

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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 5, 2015 at 12:58 PM

    love the ending line, well done.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 9:54 AM

    imaginations is the key.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 11:41 AM

    freedom of uncertainty gives me smiles.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 12:05 PM

    love how your words curve.
    beautiful imagery.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 12:35 PM

    imagination gives us wings to fly.

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  6. Lotie Bollag Mosher Kloppenburg Romney March 6, 2015 at 1:09 PM

    very smart poem.

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  7. Yun YiMarch 6, 2015 at 1:29 PM

    thank you all! cheers :-)

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  8. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton March 7, 2015 at 8:44 PM

    love your style.

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  9. Baylee Zach Layton Flecher Pichette:March 7, 2015 at 8:45 PM

    excellent descriptions.

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  10. Drew Doyle Storm Snyder MinowMarch 8, 2015 at 1:50 PM

    wow.

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  11. AnonymousMarch 10, 2015 at 9:54 AM

    excellent.
    love everything you said.

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  12. chelseaMarch 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM

    sweet.

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  13. Yun YiMarch 10, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    thank you all! cheers!

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  14. Helena FortissimaMarch 11, 2015 at 5:42 AM

    Love this one, Yun, especially the last line of it.

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  15. AnonymousMarch 11, 2015 at 10:34 AM

    grand opening.

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  16. AnonymousMarch 23, 2015 at 3:07 PM

    delicate.

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