Thursday, March 5, 2015

February Sky

February sky
opaque, like a piece of
frayed canvas,
stretched silently
behind an old stone bridge - 
underneath
weeping water runs 
for
centuries


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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 5, 2015 at 12:58 PM

    smart metaphor in the beginning,
    cheers.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 9:55 AM

    a spring in the cooking,
    lovely verse.

    ;)

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  3. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 11:42 AM

    an animation on the February sky,
    that's sweet apple pie.

    cheers.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 12:06 PM

    cool imagery.

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  5. Yun YiMarch 6, 2015 at 1:28 PM

    thank you all! cheers! :-)

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  6. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 9:31 PM

    love the title.

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  7. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton March 7, 2015 at 8:45 PM

    sweet tribe to second month of the year.
    cool.verse.

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  8. Drew Doyle Storm Snyder MinowMarch 8, 2015 at 1:50 PM

    water does cry for dynasties,
    love the poem.

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  9. humbirdMarch 8, 2015 at 4:31 PM

    Love your february sky 'frayed canvas'.., weeping water underneath.....I also have a such...very familiar sketch...

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    1. Yun YiMarch 8, 2015 at 8:22 PM

      thanks everyone for visiting and commenting!

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  10. AnonymousMarch 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM

    amazing one.

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  11. AnonymousMarch 11, 2015 at 10:35 AM

    poetic and impressive.

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