Saturday, June 5, 2010

The shadow of a pine tree


Light or dark
is decided by
the shadow of a pine tree, who
stretches her arms
ahead of
an ordinary
day of
May



11 comments:

  1. I especially love this one. How our whole reality is affected by this simple pine tree, who "stretches her arms/ahead of/an ordinary/day of/May."

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  2. So simple, yet so complex, in so very few words. Nicely done!

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  3. Really appreciate this. Light and dark, Decided by the shadow- Can be simply shade or it could have a much deeper meaning. Excellent work:)

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  4. a beautiful retrospect of nature in spring

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  5. two sentences, a perfect image painted.

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  6. thanks for all of your wonderful comments! truly appreciate them.

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  7. so much packed into so few words, beautifully done.
    ~Renee

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