Saturday, June 5, 2010

The shadow of a pine tree


Light or dark
is decided by
the shadow of a pine tree, who
stretches her arms
ahead of
an ordinary
day of
May



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11 comments:

  1. nothingprofoundJune 7, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    I especially love this one. How our whole reality is affected by this simple pine tree, who "stretches her arms/ahead of/an ordinary/day of/May."

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  2. Marbles in My PocketJune 30, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    So simple, yet so complex, in so very few words. Nicely done!

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  3. UnknownJune 30, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    Really appreciate this. Light and dark, Decided by the shadow- Can be simply shade or it could have a much deeper meaning. Excellent work:)

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  4. AnonymousJune 30, 2011 at 9:56 PM

    a beautiful retrospect of nature in spring

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  5. JingleJuly 1, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    two sentences, a perfect image painted.

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  6. Yun YiJuly 1, 2011 at 8:03 PM

    thanks for all of your wonderful comments! truly appreciate them.

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  7. Miriam SaganJuly 2, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    great concrete poem!

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  8. AnonymousJuly 2, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    This is really lovely =)

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  9. AlexandriaJuly 3, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    very nice!

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  10. AnonymousJuly 4, 2011 at 11:43 PM

    perfect.

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  11. AnonymousJuly 5, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    so much packed into so few words, beautifully done.
    ~Renee

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