Each poem is an individual life form --- it takes love to make, wisdom to nurture.
I especially love this one. How our whole reality is affected by this simple pine tree, who "stretches her arms/ahead of/an ordinary/day of/May."
So simple, yet so complex, in so very few words. Nicely done!
Really appreciate this. Light and dark, Decided by the shadow- Can be simply shade or it could have a much deeper meaning. Excellent work:)
a beautiful retrospect of nature in spring
two sentences, a perfect image painted.
thanks for all of your wonderful comments! truly appreciate them.
great concrete poem!
This is really lovely =)
so much packed into so few words, beautifully done.~Renee