Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Abstract --- reading Paul Klee (11. Flying Boats)

11. Flying boats



Time
is folded as
blank paper
by the hands of
day
by day
unfolded as
flying boats
by the hands of
children
piece
by
piece



8 comments:

  1. I like your style of writing poems. The make me think. Time is blank. Each of us unfold it from waking to waking the next day.

    I look forward to new postings.

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  2. Love this. So fanciful, like Klee's painting. Similar to a recent aphorism of mine: "Fold your cares into paper boats and send them floating downstream."

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  3. thanks NP. I somehow missed this one of your aphorism. nice and well done! love it!

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  4. yunyi, I am so glad to see you sharing your work. I adore your style.

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  5. Yun Yi

    When I read poetry like this I'm moved beyond intellect to a place of pure emotion. Thank you.

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  6. Beautiful and profound =) Love it!

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