Monday, May 30, 2011

Love (Is A Portrait)

Love (is a portrait)

Love
is a portrait of
swelling heart
framed with
infatuation, hanging
inside a room
that has no wall to support
such weightless
MATERIAL



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I am honored to receive Perfect Poet Award for the week 45. I like to vote Judith Evanfor the next award.

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  1. Judith C EvansMay 30, 2011 at 5:30 PM

    Lovely...I especially like the last 3 lines. To me, The poem expresses love in its elusive nature.

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  2. Yun YiMay 30, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    thanks Judith C Evans. i was still changing some words, but not the last 3 lines. my favorite too:-)

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  3. The UnknowngnomeMay 31, 2011 at 9:48 AM

    Very ethereal, nice!

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  4. Yun YiMay 31, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    thanks Unknowngnome!

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  5. PhotoDictionJune 4, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    I like how you continue with the theme of framed works of art, even in this expression of love. Very nice.

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  6. Yun YiJune 4, 2011 at 6:08 PM

    thanks PD!

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  7. ReneeJune 4, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Again you capture the essence of feelings intangible and make it real.

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  8. JingleJune 5, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    Thanks a lot.

    well done.

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  9. Yun YiJune 5, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    thanks jingle!

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  10. AnonymousJune 6, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    Congrats to you, well-deserved beautiful acceptance poem

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  11. Yun YiJune 6, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    thanks, mindlovemisery!

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  12. ElvirahOctober 8, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    Awesome lines of poetry on Love. This is something i have heard new about Love. Great work.

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