Monday, May 30, 2011

Love (Is A Portrait)

Love (is a portrait)

Love
is a portrait of
swelling heart
framed with
infatuation, hanging
inside a room
that has no wall to support
such weightless
MATERIAL



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I am honored to receive Perfect Poet Award for the week 45. I like to vote Judith Evanfor the next award.

13 comments:

  1. Lovely...I especially like the last 3 lines. To me, The poem expresses love in its elusive nature.

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  2. thanks Judith C Evans. i was still changing some words, but not the last 3 lines. my favorite too:-)

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  3. I like how you continue with the theme of framed works of art, even in this expression of love. Very nice.

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  4. Again you capture the essence of feelings intangible and make it real.

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  5. Congrats to you, well-deserved beautiful acceptance poem

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  6. As Poets United reaches its first anniversary this coming week we want to thank you for your support. Over the past year we have grown to 250 members plus and are steadily growing.

    Poets United is proud to have you as one of our members and look forward to another successful year.

    Your imagination, creativity and willingness to share with us is what makes our community such a wonderful place. Thank you for beautiful poetry and thank you for being a part of Poets United.

    Poets United

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  7. Awesome lines of poetry on Love. This is something i have heard new about Love. Great work.

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