Each poem is an individual life form --- it takes love to make, wisdom to nurture.
Beautiful, Yuni! Your poetry is full of grace, like Monet's painting. Such lovely music. I particularly like your use of "reluctantly" and "carelessly" in the poem. I imagine after all these eons, that's exactly how the sun would feel when it wakes up.
I had always wanted to writing something about this painting and I am happy that I finally captured that "impression" in my mind. Thank you NP! Your comments mean a lot to me, always.
This is a beautiful piece. I really like the 'dropped some whispers in water' image. Most beautiful.
Thanks Fatuous Anility!
Lovely =) You have such an elegance to your poetry
simple, elegant, expressive. Everything I love about poetry